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1. Persuasive essay
Increasing Penalties for Riding Against the Flow of Traffic

          Nowadays, there are many motorcycles on the road, but they are ridden
against traffic rules. This may cause injury or death. Riding against the flow of
traffic is dangerous for ourselves and others. Some Thai people are shameless to do
it. Hence, if  we increase penalties, it may reduce many accidents derived from
riding motorcycles in our province or country.
          First of all, present penalties is very weak. To elaborate, riding against the
flow of traffic is fined 2,000-5,000 baht and imprisoned 3 months or less.
Most people choose to be fined and to avoid imprisonment. Moreover, the penalties
are not strong enough. Hence, motorcycle riders are not afraid of the penalties and
they always do it. There are many new riders do this too. For example, I interview
10 friends person about riding against the flow of traffic and the results are that 8
persons do it because it spends less time than going to a U-turn. So, a little time is
saved by riding a motorcycle against the flow of traffic. Besides, 2 persons who
cannot ride motorcycles think that it is not good to ride incorrectly.
          Another major reason is that riding motorcycles against the flow of traffic can
cause serious accidents.  This can make us lose our family members. Members are
injured or died because of their own careless behaviors or others’. It is not good to
hear that our family.


          Consequently, we should support stronger penalties which can reduce
accidents and damage. We should campaign new penalties. In addition, fine should
be 50,000 baht with 1 year imprison. After being free, the riders be trained about
traffic rules for 3 months. Not only the police but also everybody should keep an
eye on the riders riding against the flow of traffic by video recording, remembering
their license plates, and reporting police.
          In conclusion, If the new penalties are stronger than the present ones,
the accidents will decrease and our lives will be saved. We have to support
the campaign for serious punishment for people riding against traffic laws. What are
you waiting for? Let’s campaign to increase penalties for riding against the flow of
traffic.



2.Argumentative essay: Advantage and disadvantage

Advantages and Disadvantages of Freshmen Orientation.


          Freshmen is activity arranged by sophomores, juniors, and seniors at the

beginning of the academic year in universities. There are many activities for

freshmen to participate including sports, social activities, various games, live

music and other performances. In reality, this action has both advantages and

disadvantages.

          There are many advantages freshmen orientation. Firstly, the freshmen

can learn everything in their universities advised by seniors. It is necessary for

them to know the history, general information, administrators, staff, teachers,

buildings and rules of university. Secondly, the freshmen can find new friends

and seniors who can help them do the activities with joy. Moreover, it can

promote unity among students. Thirdly, learning how to behave properly in

university, such as dressing contacting with officers and driving in the

university are also guided. Many important things can be learned from

seniors this activities. If the freshmen do not join the activities, they do not

know various things about the universities and they may behave

inappropriately.




          On the other hand, the freshmen have some disadvantages. For example,

the freshmen do not have time for personal activities because they spend most

of their time for the activities. Moreover, there may be disagreement between

the freshmen and the seniors. This may cause violence among the students.

Furthermore, some activities are arranged taking good of teachers and

administrators danger, like doing activities at the beach, waterfall,

forest, etc. Besides, the students have to play a lot of money if they do activities

outside the universities. Because both the freshmen and the seniors are in the

same age range, they will be in great trouble when dangerous things happen. If

someone is died, it will be a great sorrow to everyone joining the activities.

          In conclusion, there are both for agree and against the freshmen

orientation. Each university is different and arranges different activities for their

freshmen. However, benefits always come along with drawbacks. It depends on

our decisions whether to join the activities or not.



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